how will i survive?? (a song/poem)

hey..ive been a constant writer since a long long time now...havent written since an year now..but yeah i plan to start again..hoping to get some motivation from your side..

i'm writing a book on the life of a 19year old..i will post that later..ive written around 30 msword pages..apart from this..i compose lyrics..usually alternative and rap..i'm hesitant on posting all my compositions as people steal it and use it without the permission of the composer, which is sad.

my first post is of something i went through recently..im sure you'd get the picture..its called " how will i survive..."




There’s a dark cloud surrounding me
The days don’t seem too good
It’s not easy to survive…the darkness… is scary
I am alone in this world, just me and my soul
Life has been taken away from my hands
A ball of fire piercing through me
There’s a lot to be said…
Yet so less to be heard..
Reality has shown its true colors
I cant control this anymore..
My anger is about to burst out
But no one to take it out on
It’s all supposed to be pushed inside you
In this tiny world
Not just physically
But mentally
It’s torturing
How will I …manage to survive?

---posted in new blog---
"Net friend (poem)"

the friendship over net poem is really cute..good work...

i loved the 'how will i survive one' ....

and yea..looking forward to some excerpts from ur book..all the best dude!

both the poems r quite gud .... frnship over net is short n sweet!

uve got style mate...

the next ones called "red alert" its actually a song...we'd recorded it even but for me its pure words and meaning

i sum it up in a few simple words "about a war scene, a person injured and dying"

Red Alert

Silence in the darkness,
Not a soul in sight,
Jut a gun in ur fucking hand,
But no one to fight,
No one to talk to, nothing to eat…
Tripping over limbs of bodies
Searching for someone to join in overcoming this treacherous time.

[chorus]
Wondering how all this started off,
Wondering how to overcome this all,
Wondering when this red alert would ever end…
Searching for a living soul
But there’s no hope when this red alert goes….

[rap]
There’s always been a thought in my mind,
To be rich and in a family of four.
A wife, 2 kids and a house of my own.
But finding even a friend seems tough for me
There have been so many things been happening with me
This life has no future for me
[[I guess I’ll just shoot my self and get it over with]]
Waiting for a ray of light to come and
Help me stay alive in these impossible times.
[rap end]

Show me the way, how do i relieve this pain,
A way to gain the soul in me.
Hoping to see someone in sight
Craving to stay alive
A red alert, a red alert…

its sad people dont respond after reading!!

dude...i like ur way of writting......i like shaddy stuff....good goin....peace\/

d lyrics are kick ass...where can i get the song??

its recorded on a cassette..and i am way too lazy to make an mp3 out of it..dont even have a cassette player now.

aaaww....lazybum...do some work yea...i'd love to hear this one!!

crisp lyrics...but when can i hear it???
itl sound better then u knw

whoaaaa...u;re prety gud...liked d emotions jus strikes d heart!