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PostSubject: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:29 am

I Found You

For sometime I found myself lost,
Today you’ve helped me find myself.
For sometime I found myself broken,
Today you’ve helped me to get up again….

I could not smile,
Thinking of the tragic past.
I could only weep,
Thinking of what I’ve been through.

But now you have changed it all,
But now you have helped me rise from the fall.
You have brought me a reason to smile,
You have brought me a stream of happiness which will never run
dry………..


You stepped into my life,
And filled it with colors of joy.
You stepped into my life,
And gave me a reason to try.

It’s beautiful- the way you smile
It’s beautiful- when you have those expressions in your eyes.
You fill my thoughts day in night out
You fill my thoughts with love and smile throughout.

I see you as a friend,

I see you as a mate.
I see you as a reason,
I see you as my fate.

You might think that I am flirting with you,
But these are words I penned down as I thought about you.
You might think I’m in love with your beauty,
Yes its true- I love the beauty which lies within you…

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Avi Lakhotiarabbit
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:31 am

absolutely amazing..truly fromt he heart!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:35 am

hey thanx.... each and every word in this poem was heart felt.... and it really worked well for me!!!!!!Wink
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:37 am

i wish sumone wrote such beautiful poems for me...i'd be on my knees and done watever taht person wants me to..lolz!! but truly...it had to work!!


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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:40 am

Very Happy he he........ if only campus 18 had started one year ago!!!Wink but thank you for appreciating the poem...... i'll try to come up with better and more romantic poems.......
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:46 am

am not much into romantic poetry...bt really like true poetry..straight from the heart types!!
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:49 am

gr8 poem...straight from the heart...loved every bit of it
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:51 am

hmm....... well most of the stuff that comes out from the heart is filled with love...as heart is filled with love(besides love).... but on a serious note.... poems like the one i have written are a simple jotting down the very next thought that comes into ur mind when u see somebody or something that inspires u.... and for a person to appreciate this kind of work...shows that the person has a beautiful river of thoughts flowing within him/her......
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:52 am

hey thanx romina!!!
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:55 am

can't say about the beatiful river of thoughts flowing inside me...cause i don't have the talent of putting these thoughts on paper....as beautifully as u just did!!
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 2:01 am

now you are been too sweet!!!!! any ways.... if u do want to find about the "river of thoughts"......... try writing........ dont think....just write on anything...... your computer, your doggie..... anything!!! that's the way i came up with my first poem...... i'll have to find it.... it was dumb..... but then u can get things corrected by ur frends and all the ppl who read the poem.....

and another thing...... it's not necessary to rhyme the lines.. that will come automatically.....
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 2:03 am

i did try my hand at poetry...my first poem's on this section too...chek it out..it reads "mah first stint with poetry..sacrifice!!'
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 2:09 am

das really a very honest n sweeet poem ... loved it!
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 2:10 am

i posted this poem in confusion,
only to find out that there is a nikhita and a romina
somewhere in india....
who liked it!!!

i'd like to thank you ladies,
it was really nice of you.
i'll post many more...
if i find your replies on them!!!

by showing appreciation to my heart felt words,
you have been really nice to me....



sorry i cant complete this one....... this happens with me all the time.....the flow breaks and then i can't finish the thing.... but how was it for an instant poem??????? i hope it was not too stupid!!!! lolz...........
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 2:12 am

this is like sooo cool...finsih it soon yea...and wats with sumwhre in india?? we from delhi yaar!!
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 2:18 am

aare that was for rhyming......
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Tue Aug 21, 2007 2:20 am

hey ritika...... thanx for appreciating the poem..... and u look really sweet...
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Wed Aug 22, 2007 11:59 pm

ooohhh thunkooo thunkooo ... but amazing poem ... luking forward to reading the whole completed version!
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Thu Aug 23, 2007 9:36 pm

sweet.... neat poem
keeep it up..
n next time u gonna complete my poems from ur HEART!!
not like that one!! lolzzzz
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Fri Aug 24, 2007 12:39 am

aare im sorry for that........ i'm very bad at writing serious stuff.... nikhita has read one of my serious poems....i'm sure she would have kicked me had i been in front of her......... anyways... next time i'll be good!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Fri Aug 24, 2007 12:42 am

lolzz...
just kiddin bro...
rofl!!
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Sat Sep 01, 2007 8:04 pm

oye-hoye avi!!!
now from where does the inspiration for dis comes from?!!!!!!
hmmmmmmmmmm i think i know!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Sat Sep 01, 2007 11:39 pm

u sure do.........
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Sun Sep 02, 2007 12:16 am

tat was like 1 wriiten frm the deepest part f the heart ...including emotions, happiness, joy nd the feeling f love itself.....
gr8 work dude...keep it up
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PostSubject: Re: I Found You...... mah poem!!   Sun Sep 02, 2007 1:52 am

thanx man..........
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