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pratap
Number of posts : 25 Age : 36 Location : mumbai Registration date : 2007-07-23
| Subject: INDIAN MASALA... Tue Aug 21, 2007 6:22 pm | |
| (ok this is my second post here on forumotion...dont think anyone read my earlier post....hope im luckier this time...) INDIAN MASALA...
Sanjay Dutt imprisoned; Jessicca Lall redeemed; The Mig-21 scandal exposed in Rang De Basanti; While Munnabhai and RDB ruled the roost; People like you and me had to endure K-Jo's master-piece too!! (*read Shakespearean masterpiece*) Omkara brought us closer to the Shakespearean Odyssey; The only thing that made sense was Beepasa's "BEEDI";(*wink*) Black Friday and Parzania had us screaming for more; Such hard hitting movies ; Audiences never witnessed before; Abhi-Ash our very own Brangelina; At Cannes, The French Open,they were everywhere; The last that anyone heard of them; They were scouting the streets of Africa!!! Back Home; The Big-B was seen milking cows and ploughing fields; No,it's not another commercial; It's his job,he's a "Farmer" after all!!
The Indian Cricket Team at the World Cup; Were a class apart; From endorsing "WORLDCUP KO-LA"; To dancing with people on the road chanting"Ooh aaa INDIAA,aaaaya INDIA"(*ghanta*) They managed to do it all. Dada bludgened his opponents with a swashbuckling 14 off 63 balls; And Sehwag,well he was just turning bald; Dhoni's new hair colour highlighted the news channels all day; The day he cuts his hair,I'm sure will be declared a national holiday. So all in all our team didn't do too bad; When not filling their undies with gold ; The kicked Bermuda's ass.(*rock on*) Cmon people lets hear some applause!!! And for the ever positive Indian like you and me, "ye time nahi jeeta ,chalta hai,next time hai na; aur next time toh Sunfeast khake aur Boost Peeke , har ghar me SACHIN daudega.toh AGLA cup toh hum log hi jeetega" Kyu sahi bola naa GANPAT!!!........
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kabeer
Number of posts : 10 Registration date : 2007-06-09
| Subject: Re: INDIAN MASALA... Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:33 pm | |
| Sarcasm - Yes Humour-Yes Idea-Great(but convoluted) Charm-no | |
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Nikhita
Number of posts : 1492 Age : 36 Location : Delhi Registration date : 2007-06-09
| Subject: Re: INDIAN MASALA... Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:41 pm | |
| the concept is nice...but the presentation is a li'l complicated...and hence confuses the reader..and therefore you don't get replies!! | |
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pratap
Number of posts : 25 Age : 36 Location : mumbai Registration date : 2007-07-23
| Subject: Re: INDIAN MASALA... Tue Aug 21, 2007 11:09 pm | |
| yay!!...finally some1 replies...first of all... thanks a ton for some constructive criticism...ill surely work on the presentation when i put something up again... cheers! | |
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srimoyi
Number of posts : 112 Age : 37 Location : kolkata Registration date : 2007-07-21
| Subject: Re: INDIAN MASALA... Wed Aug 29, 2007 1:18 am | |
| ya gotta agree...da thot is really good..bt cud hav bn btr expressed | |
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adi
Number of posts : 143 Age : 38 Location : kolkata Registration date : 2007-07-07
| Subject: Re: INDIAN MASALA... Wed Aug 29, 2007 3:34 pm | |
| great stuff...nice ideas...but has to be a blog rite...so a little twiching here n ther wil do it...otherwise a good read... n dude don worry i do not get replies to my poems too...but the few intelligent ones are enuff... | |
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pratap
Number of posts : 25 Age : 36 Location : mumbai Registration date : 2007-07-23
| Subject: Re: INDIAN MASALA... Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:29 pm | |
| @adi...i figured that out....but opinions do matter man...so thnx to all those who have...lol.. | |
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pratap
Number of posts : 25 Age : 36 Location : mumbai Registration date : 2007-07-23
| Subject: Re: INDIAN MASALA... Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:30 pm | |
| @everyone... see my post VOICES too...no1 has seen tht i think | |
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Aarushi
Number of posts : 96 Age : 36 Location : pune Registration date : 2007-08-04
| Subject: Re: INDIAN MASALA... Thu Aug 30, 2007 2:04 pm | |
| i have seen 1 and i did reply/its different and more like rap than a poem...but dnt worry ..evrything doesn have to be charming yaa.. | |
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Siddz1910
Number of posts : 58 Age : 37 Location : Bangalore Registration date : 2007-08-09
| Subject: Re: INDIAN MASALA... Thu Aug 30, 2007 9:21 pm | |
| to much to read getting brain pain!!!!!!!! but a good one none the less watever i read | |
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