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kshitij
 Number of posts : 7
Age : 38
Location : indore
Registration date : 2007-08-06
| Subject: WOUNDED SOUL  Sat Aug 11, 2007 3:56 pm | |
| Wounded Soul
Hats-off to you all !
Hats-off to you all !
Who am I ?
You wanna know who am I ?
Iam unfortunately the soul
the soul of girl
raped and brutally murdered last night.
Was it my fault
I was born as a girl
A girl who wanted to enjoy
the ecstasy of life
A girl who loved everyone
in her vicinity more than thyself.
I lived with the society of
brutal and hypocrital minds
I felt the breeze of adolescence
I perceived the essence of adolescence
I too aspired to fulfill
my parent's dreams
I too wanted to see
the rapture tears in my parent's eyes
But one night I encountered
encountered the devilism of this society
I was brutally raped
raped by devils of this society
I yelled yelled and yelled
but my agony losted in the hypocritical breeze
My life shattered like pack of cards
I was left with a wounded soul
an unfortunate wounded soul.
Was it my fate ???
Was it the Almighty justice ???
I don't think so !!!
Every girl's fate is framed
framed by the jackals of this society
Every girl is supposed to be the victim
of the sexual appetite of this society.
I can cry
But why should i cry ???
I will smile
I will smile at pangs of society.......... | |
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avinc
Number of posts : 354
Age : 37
Location : Delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: WOUNDED SOUL Sat Aug 11, 2007 4:41 pm | |
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blue_bantoo
Number of posts : 46
Age : 36
Location : kolkata
Registration date : 2007-08-08
| | Subject: Re: WOUNDED SOUL Sat Aug 11, 2007 9:40 pm | |
| the poem portrays a girls state of mid..nd very strange that u hav portraid it very nicely...gr8 job | |
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kshitij
Number of posts : 7
Age : 38
Location : indore
Registration date : 2007-08-06
| | Subject: Re: WOUNDED SOUL Sat Aug 11, 2007 11:30 pm | |
| @ blue ........
thankx buddy ........ | |
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mandeepchadha85
Number of posts : 699
Age : 39
Location : Delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-26
| | Subject: Re: WOUNDED SOUL Sun Aug 12, 2007 12:10 am | |
| dude it was awsum....despite being a guy, u wrote sumthng portraying a dejected girl's state of mind...i think it was brilliant...way to go dude.. | |
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romina.madan
 Number of posts : 236
Age : 36
Registration date : 2007-07-03
| | Subject: Re: WOUNDED SOUL Sun Aug 12, 2007 12:18 am | |
| yaaa its a really nice poem...a few guys do this n ur 1 of dem.. | |
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ritika.suri
Number of posts : 237
Age : 36
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-02
| | Subject: Re: WOUNDED SOUL Sun Aug 12, 2007 12:52 am | |
| nice ... its gud how a guy has managed to empathis with a girl whose been tortured in such a way ... gud goin! | |
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rishab
Number of posts : 152
Age : 36
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-26
| | Subject: Re: WOUNDED SOUL Sun Aug 12, 2007 11:19 am | |
| damn gud....rock on buddy.... | |
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gurpreet_bagga
Number of posts : 112
Age : 35
Location : Pune
Registration date : 2007-08-12
| | Subject: Re: WOUNDED SOUL Tue Aug 14, 2007 11:45 pm | |
| its awesome... keep d gud work... | |
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thoughtstorm
Number of posts : 18
Registration date : 2007-06-14
| | Subject: Re: WOUNDED SOUL Fri Aug 17, 2007 9:29 pm | |
| its funny, that people are emphasising on the fact that the poem has been written by a guy, and not on the girl, who is the real character of the story. | |
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