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Reverie
 Number of posts : 39
Age : 36
Registration date : 2007-07-09
| Subject: The LOST SUCKER!!  Wed Aug 08, 2007 4:43 am | |
| The lost sucker!! Like a lucid dream, it glints before the eyes Glides over the wrinkles of those perfect lines A sweet commotion, as it scratches gently Like the nails of that woman, your muse, your like… Many emotions it injects, emotions romantic A daze black for the nights, the sky in charm pink It reminds me of the relics of past time So again into it deep I sink. Parker, Sheaffer or Reynolds … the Fountain Pen is my love. A lost passion for none want to go through the dab, smudge, splosh et al. But don’t you see?? That pen is truly yours. The Fountain Pen, as I correctly put it, is mine muse. | |
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adi
 Number of posts : 143
Age : 38
Location : kolkata
Registration date : 2007-07-07
| | Subject: Re: The LOST SUCKER!! Wed Aug 08, 2007 2:08 pm | |
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Reverie
Number of posts : 39
Age : 36
Registration date : 2007-07-09
| | Subject: Re: The LOST SUCKER!! Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:05 am | |
| thank you. appreciate it. | |
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Nishaan
Number of posts : 34
Age : 37
Location : Manipal
Registration date : 2007-08-04
| | Subject: Re: The LOST SUCKER!! Thu Aug 09, 2007 3:11 am | |
| Not a big fan of poetry but I liked the way this was written...a natural, smooth flow of words without trying too hard to be deep. Only one question...is that last part intentionally written as "mine muse"? Because I thought it would be "my muse". | |
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avinc
Number of posts : 354
Age : 37
Location : Delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: The LOST SUCKER!! Thu Aug 09, 2007 6:42 pm | |
| really nice ya..its imposible to guess by the topic name as to what the poems about | |
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dcemaverick
Number of posts : 117
Registration date : 2007-06-09
| | Subject: Re: The LOST SUCKER!! Thu Aug 09, 2007 8:46 pm | |
| zabardast man........the title is very appropriate! i quite loved it..... | |
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supriya
Number of posts : 439
Age : 36
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-06-05
| | Subject: Re: The LOST SUCKER!! Thu Aug 09, 2007 10:55 pm | |
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romina.madan
Number of posts : 236
Age : 36
Registration date : 2007-07-03
| | Subject: Re: The LOST SUCKER!! Thu Aug 09, 2007 10:58 pm | |
| ohhh!!! its so amazing....good work ya... | |
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nayanika
Number of posts : 48
Registration date : 2007-07-07
| | Subject: Re: The LOST SUCKER!! Thu Aug 09, 2007 11:14 pm | |
| Title rocks..so does the writing..great goin... | |
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Reverie
Number of posts : 39
Age : 36
Registration date : 2007-07-09
| | Subject: Re: The LOST SUCKER!! Fri Aug 10, 2007 12:13 am | |
| *Nishaan - Yes, that was indeed intentional. I myself seldom do or appreciate poetry, but when it comes to writing about something, thinking of which gives you a headrush, words just automatically rhyme!!
*Avinc - Thank you! feels great coming from you. you're NO less!!!!
*Dcemaverick - Thank you Mr. Maverick.. I.. Dared ;P
*Supp reya - Thankee! Love you (that just rolls out itself)..
*Ramina - this pretty woman is indeed kind =)
*Nayanika - Thank you so much. Do drop by often =) | |
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AnIsHa RaLhAn
Number of posts : 158
Age : 35
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-28
| | Subject: Re: The LOST SUCKER!! Fri Aug 10, 2007 11:35 pm | |
| brillianto ...lady....d lost sucker,,,but definitely nt a looser.. | |
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avi
Number of posts : 68
Age : 36
Location : kolkata
Registration date : 2007-07-20
| | Subject: Re: The LOST SUCKER!! Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:32 am | |
| lovely work...........  | |
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