Our original..New song we are composing..

Hi everybody..well pune ppl know me n rudra..well we are composing this song which i have written n probably we will be ready wid it soon..its based on the farmer suicides in vidarbha and the blindfire killings in bengal of the farmers over disputed land for SEZs..so here go d first few lines..n do gimme some critical comments..this is serious stuff so avoid d jokes..
we gave it the title-Killing Fields

The last drop of water is gone
On his fields he waits for a storm.
But the sky is naked and blue
Death and tears thats all in its form.
Its been like this for so long.
Frustration never was so strong.
The very earth it calls for a song.
Its been wailing out for so long...
Killing fields oh they bleed away,
Into the seas of your own democracy.
Killing Fields oh we have again
On those YOU feed and we die today...

Some place where the water is strong,
The old farmer he sings out his song.
But the sky is naked maroon.
For the dead and their blood is around.
Its been so calm for so long,
The red flag now flies in this storm.
Heads are shattered and bodies are torn.
As the triggers on those guns are drawn...
Killing fields oh they bleed away,
Into the seas of your own monopoly.
Killing fields in the east again,
On those YOU feed and we die today..

So ppl lemme know how is it..this is not the whole song but a part of it..we have to work out the fast parts and the lead..Its gonna be heavy stuff..

Hiee kaustabh,
The lyrics is pretty nice..so u guys will b programming and recording as well?Campus 18 needs original music tracks for the MUZIK section that wil b up on the website after the launch...so you can send me a demo or the final mix if u r interested..

nevsay@hotmail.com

hey man good work...i think we ought to know precisely what lind of serious music enthusiasts we have on our forum...so we can work together on interestin stuff...

hey song is gud!!
have u decided smthing on the structure, riffs , solo part. lead etc ...!!!
dun no why but evry time i read the lyrics "a tout le monde's" muzik is playin keep it heavy but slow like "tout le monde" with good use of solos!!
rock on.

NEVSAY wrote:

Hiee kaustabh,
The lyrics is pretty nice..so u guys will b programming and recording as well?Campus 18 needs original music tracks for the MUZIK section that wil b up on the website after the launch...so you can send me a demo or the final mix if u r interested..

nevsay@hotmail.com

hey u say campus18 needs original music tracks...i have some...but they are only music...no lyrics...they are not songs they are just tracks....could that b considered?

does song writing always have to be so blunt

yeah we do hav worked out sum parts..its gonna be a bit slow..n picks up speed at the end..don worry it'll be good..

great lyrics...............hope the tuning n music stuff goes of well dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@kaustubhh...great work dude...now I am proud of the fact that I met such a talented person amongst the talented lot in Pune! Am sure that the final product will be convincingly great!

@ amrit_jmi - Yes..C-18 invites original tracks as well...So just send across your work!