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PostSubject: INDIAN MASALA...   Tue Aug 21, 2007 6:22 pm

(ok this is my second post here on forumotion...dont think anyone read my earlier post....hope im luckier this time...)

INDIAN MASALA...


Sanjay Dutt imprisoned;
Jessicca Lall redeemed;
The Mig-21 scandal exposed in Rang De Basanti;
While Munnabhai and RDB ruled the roost;
People like you and me had to endure K-Jo's master-piece too!!
(*read Shakespearean masterpiece*)
Omkara brought us closer to the Shakespearean Odyssey;
The only thing that made sense was Beepasa's "BEEDI";(*wink*)
Black Friday and Parzania had us screaming for more;
Such hard hitting movies ;
Audiences never witnessed before;
Abhi-Ash our very own Brangelina;
At Cannes, The French Open,they were everywhere;
The last that anyone heard of them;
They were scouting the streets of Africa!!!
Back Home;
The Big-B was seen milking cows and ploughing fields;
No,it's not another commercial;
It's his job,he's a "Farmer" after all!!



The Indian Cricket Team at the World Cup;
Were a class apart;
From endorsing "WORLDCUP KO-LA";
To dancing with people on the road chanting"Ooh aaa INDIAA,aaaaya INDIA"(*ghanta*)
They managed to do it all.
Dada bludgened his opponents with a swashbuckling 14 off 63 balls;
And Sehwag,well he was just turning bald;
Dhoni's new hair colour highlighted the news channels all day;
The day he cuts his hair,I'm sure will be declared a national holiday.
So all in all our team didn't do too bad;
When not filling their undies with gold ;
The kicked Bermuda's ass.(*rock on*)
Cmon people lets hear some applause!!!
And for the ever positive Indian like you and me,
"ye time nahi jeeta ,chalta hai,next time hai na;
aur next time toh Sunfeast khake aur Boost Peeke ,
har ghar me SACHIN daudega.toh AGLA cup toh hum log hi jeetega"
Kyu sahi bola naa GANPAT!!!........


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PostSubject: Re: INDIAN MASALA...   Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:33 pm

Sarcasm - Yes
Humour-Yes
Idea-Great(but convoluted)
Charm-no
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PostSubject: Re: INDIAN MASALA...   Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:41 pm

the concept is nice...but the presentation is a li'l complicated...and hence confuses the reader..and therefore you don't get replies!!
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PostSubject: Re: INDIAN MASALA...   Tue Aug 21, 2007 11:09 pm

yay!!...finally some1 replies...first of all... thanks a ton for some constructive criticism...ill surely work on the presentation when i put something up again...
cheers!
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PostSubject: Re: INDIAN MASALA...   Wed Aug 29, 2007 1:18 am

ya gotta agree...da thot is really good..bt cud hav bn btr expressed
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PostSubject: Re: INDIAN MASALA...   Wed Aug 29, 2007 3:34 pm

great stuff...nice ideas...but has to be a blog rite...so a little twiching here n ther wil do it...otherwise a good read...
n dude don worry i do not get replies to my poems too...but the few intelligent ones are enuff...
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PostSubject: Re: INDIAN MASALA...   Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:29 pm

@adi...i figured that out....but opinions do matter man...so thnx to all those who have...lol..
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PostSubject: Re: INDIAN MASALA...   Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:30 pm

@everyone...
see my post VOICES too...no1 has seen tht i think
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PostSubject: Re: INDIAN MASALA...   Thu Aug 30, 2007 2:04 pm

i have seen 1 and i did reply/its different and more like rap than a poem...but dnt worry ..evrything doesn have to be charming yaa..
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PostSubject: Re: INDIAN MASALA...   Thu Aug 30, 2007 9:21 pm

to much to read
getting brain pain!!!!!!!!Shocked
but a good one none the less watever i read
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