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PostSubject: felt to you...   Tue Aug 21, 2007 8:13 am

written sometime in class 11...

FELT TO YOU.

you kept me from yourself so,
but my feelings were strong,
i wish that you would know,
the contradiction in this song.

i wandered so insatiated,
to search for your hand,
but the truth was ill fated,
trying to make you understand.

tried to reach out and touch you,
for you to know that i care,
tried to make myself felt to you,
but you were never there.


you would not be vindicated,
for these games you play,
but i would be convicted,
for my love this way.
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PostSubject: Re: felt to you...   Tue Aug 21, 2007 6:25 pm

"you would not be vindicated,
for these games you play,
but i would be convicted,
for my love this way."

good one!
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PostSubject: Re: felt to you...   Wed Aug 29, 2007 3:35 pm

people if this poem is pathetic atleast say it...i will improve....if u find it boring say that too...or for that matter anythin at all...
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PostSubject: Re: felt to you...   Wed Aug 29, 2007 5:18 pm

dont b so harsh on urself!! its not pathetic in the least. its realy nice, except dat its a little hard to understand wat exactly ur tryin to say... but i guess dats not always a bad thing!!Wink
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PostSubject: Re: felt to you...   Sun Sep 02, 2007 2:49 am

damn nice yaar!! for class eleven's stdrds.... too gud yaar!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: felt to you...   Thu Sep 06, 2007 8:37 am

thanks simran...the joke is that i would write a lot in school...and nice stuff too.... but somehow i have lost it in 2 yrs of college life...
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