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+10tapish YUVIKA srimoyi rishab aditisharma gurpreet_bagga ritika.suri SOUMAVA blue_bantoo coolguy.rishabh 14 posters |
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coolguy.rishabh
Number of posts : 36 Age : 36 Location : behala Registration date : 2007-08-08
| Subject: LOVE KILLS Tue Aug 14, 2007 12:44 am | |
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Hey people...tried my hand at poetry with this morbid poem....not my personal views tho'...just felt like writing 'bout this.....hope u like it...
Love Kills
Life takes a toll on you
but you live to tell the tale.
Love sucks your soul
And your body lives to rot in hell
Those who say love is life
Are fucking liars, trust my word my friend
They have never loved truly
Or haven’t lived to see love end.
But I believe in the words “till death do us apart”,
‘cause in love, death plays a big part.
You die every second, every minute, every hour
Thinking how faithful truly is your lover.
Who am I to say all this
To say that love never pays?
Trust me my friends, I know it all,
‘cause I’ve been dead for the last three days.
It took a second for the bullet to pierce my skull
The gun still smoking in my girl’s hand’
I fell face down on the dusty road
No witness to my death on the barren land.
So I plead to you all, my dear friends,
Do not love if you wanna live well.
I’ve seen people die in this stupid game
I don’t want any more companions in hell.
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blue_bantoo
Number of posts : 46 Age : 35 Location : kolkata Registration date : 2007-08-08
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Tue Aug 14, 2007 12:50 am | |
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SOUMAVA
Number of posts : 33 Age : 36 Location : KOLKATA Registration date : 2007-08-05
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Tue Aug 14, 2007 1:24 am | |
| GURU WAT RU DOING HERE........... GO AHEAD...WE WANT MORE FROM U.... | |
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ritika.suri
Number of posts : 237 Age : 36 Location : delhi Registration date : 2007-07-02
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Tue Aug 14, 2007 1:41 am | |
| wowww ... i loved it ... gr8 expression ... amazing style n every word is true! | |
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coolguy.rishabh
Number of posts : 36 Age : 36 Location : behala Registration date : 2007-08-08
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Tue Aug 14, 2007 9:25 pm | |
| thnx every1 4 your appreciation | |
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gurpreet_bagga
Number of posts : 112 Age : 35 Location : Pune Registration date : 2007-08-12
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Tue Aug 14, 2007 11:36 pm | |
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aditisharma
Number of posts : 11 Age : 35 Location : Noida Registration date : 2007-07-15
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Tue Aug 14, 2007 11:52 pm | |
| hehheheheheeh goood goood! | |
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rishab
Number of posts : 152 Age : 35 Location : delhi Registration date : 2007-07-26
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Wed Aug 15, 2007 11:59 pm | |
| ur rite buddy....i appreciate yr work....gud | |
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srimoyi
Number of posts : 112 Age : 36 Location : kolkata Registration date : 2007-07-21
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:43 am | |
| the pathos n irony is really beautifully expressed.....good job..i especially liked the part abt being dead for da past three days...bears similarity wid poems of owen wilson..tho the topic is nt of his genre....kp writing... | |
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YUVIKA
Number of posts : 50 Age : 36 Registration date : 2007-06-09
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Thu Aug 16, 2007 8:24 pm | |
| hey rishabh ,i must say i m impressed by u buddy,a true pic of wat love is................hats off to u............... please rite sum more stuff similar to it...........waitin to read it soon | |
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tapish
Number of posts : 31 Age : 36 Location : College Of Business Studies, DU Registration date : 2007-07-29
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Thu Aug 16, 2007 9:46 pm | |
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coolguy.rishabh
Number of posts : 36 Age : 36 Location : behala Registration date : 2007-08-08
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:28 pm | |
| thnx people...nd yuvika.....sure will try 2 write more on this...that is unless a tru lover bumps me off......... | |
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romina.madan
Number of posts : 236 Age : 36 Registration date : 2007-07-03
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:53 am | |
| expresses everything...amazin stff...write more often.. | |
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smriti d
Number of posts : 150 Age : 36 Registration date : 2007-07-07
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:57 am | |
| Ki deecho baba!!!!!!!!!!!!! | |
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coolguy.rishabh
Number of posts : 36 Age : 36 Location : behala Registration date : 2007-08-08
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Sat Aug 18, 2007 11:40 am | |
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pratimdoshiii
Number of posts : 16 Age : 35 Location : Pune Registration date : 2007-07-28
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Sat Aug 18, 2007 12:16 pm | |
| hey very nicely written !!! go on buddy ... | |
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adi
Number of posts : 143 Age : 37 Location : kolkata Registration date : 2007-07-07
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Sat Aug 18, 2007 1:40 pm | |
| though i do not agree with any word of yours its not a question of agreement since its a very well written and beautifully expressed.....it wil be understood by all... | |
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coolguy.rishabh
Number of posts : 36 Age : 36 Location : behala Registration date : 2007-08-08
| Subject: Re: LOVE KILLS Sat Aug 18, 2007 7:45 pm | |
| thanks Adi....really gr8 2 know that inspite of disagreeing with my poem u still liked it | |
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