set me free...

had written this poem sometime in class 11...one of my simplest ones..nothin gr8 literally but i like it...

SET ME FREE

you haunt my dreams at night,
taking me to lands unseen,
confused i hold on tight,
to a beautiful midnight dream.

all day i long for you,
until the time we meet,
every night you walk me through,
those winding endless streets.

don't consume me so,
for i shall lose my sight,
i'm afraid i do not know,
if i dream at morn or night.

you have to set me free,
why don't you realize,
that you shall always be,
beautiful in my eyes.

every night and day,
i pray for dignity,
give my heart away,
to me for eternity.

i love it..but is it for your girl? or who?

dude....simplicity has its own charm....u don need to have awsum vocab or great english to write a poem......its just bout expressing urself...i loved ur poem....great depth...keep it up..

man it was for an imaginary woman who ruled my thoughts for years...and kept n love with an figment of imagination...

wow i applaud u even more then...the feelings are so striking

holaaa...and i thought you only debate with me!!! awesome dude...the feelings come across really well!!

lady you mite think i was debating but that was only a diff viewpoint...while i agreed with you all the way...