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aanchalsaxena
Number of posts : 25 Age : 35 Location : New Delhi Registration date : 2007-07-19
| Subject: What is FUN ?? Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:37 pm | |
| I'd been preparing for The midsems a fortnight ago, Now they’re over And I’ve nothing to do. I’m not worried about What marks I will get. They’re over now, And I just wanna forget The thought of end-sems. I’m gonna do just fine, I’m okay above average. Not interested to shine. I’m not one of those Who read physics at bedtime. Not one who completes The assignments on time. I just do as much work, As is required to get me through The myriad of mid- and end-sems. That’s all I wanna do. Wait! I wanna do more More than my 4 yr degree I wanna learn new things Try out new stuff and see These are the four years When I can have maximum fun Do whatever I like Without any worries or tension What is fun? You might ask, So let me give a brief description Of all the things that make our life More than a doctor’s prescription Its running wildly on the streets When no-one’s looking Just completely losing it Or that’s what we think Its waiting for days to get A glimpse of that hot guy Who makes you speechless And you fumble for a “Hi!” Its running back to hostel When you’re halfway home To get back your charger Which you’ve left in your room Its smuggling a friend Into the hostel And playing guitar At half past ten There are many more definitions, Fun is the name of the game, Bunking, chatting, laughing(ragging!) For us its all the same!
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rishab
Number of posts : 152 Age : 35 Location : delhi Registration date : 2007-07-26
| Subject: Re: What is FUN ?? Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:55 pm | |
| cute n simple way 2 describe yr story...huh?? kewl | |
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aanchalsaxena
Number of posts : 25 Age : 35 Location : New Delhi Registration date : 2007-07-19
| Subject: Re: What is FUN ?? Wed Aug 08, 2007 8:26 pm | |
| thanx! actually im being lazy.......i had written this on my blog a few months back......when our exams n fests were over... | |
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avinc
Number of posts : 354 Age : 36 Location : Delhi Registration date : 2007-07-08
| Subject: Re: What is FUN ?? Wed Aug 08, 2007 8:35 pm | |
| i like it...its shows your everyday life..and couldnt be more true..
i think u didnt put in the last two lines properly..dont mind..just my opinion..as in the words dont fit well | |
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aanchalsaxena
Number of posts : 25 Age : 35 Location : New Delhi Registration date : 2007-07-19
| Subject: Re: What is FUN ?? Wed Aug 08, 2007 8:37 pm | |
| well i was just trying to finish it in the same mood as the rest of the poem...........there is always scope for improvement........ | |
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avinc
Number of posts : 354 Age : 36 Location : Delhi Registration date : 2007-07-08
| Subject: Re: What is FUN ?? Wed Aug 08, 2007 8:44 pm | |
| yeah..but maybe if u end it summing it up in one line it'll be just amazing.. | |
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aanchalsaxena
Number of posts : 25 Age : 35 Location : New Delhi Registration date : 2007-07-19
| Subject: Re: What is FUN ?? Wed Aug 08, 2007 8:50 pm | |
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romina.madan
Number of posts : 236 Age : 36 Registration date : 2007-07-03
| Subject: Re: What is FUN ?? Wed Aug 08, 2007 8:53 pm | |
| ya even i feel the same thing..u can change the last 2 lines...otherwise the poem is perfect,.....good work... | |
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aanchalsaxena
Number of posts : 25 Age : 35 Location : New Delhi Registration date : 2007-07-19
| Subject: Re: What is FUN ?? Wed Aug 08, 2007 9:01 pm | |
| How bout this:
"There are many more definitions, Fun is the name of the game, Bunking, chatting, laughing(ragging!) For us its all the same!"
errrrr i guess its worse........ | |
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avinc
Number of posts : 354 Age : 36 Location : Delhi Registration date : 2007-07-08
| Subject: Re: What is FUN ?? Wed Aug 08, 2007 9:15 pm | |
| it rhymes dam well now..nice! | |
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aanchalsaxena
Number of posts : 25 Age : 35 Location : New Delhi Registration date : 2007-07-19
| Subject: Re: What is FUN ?? Wed Aug 08, 2007 9:29 pm | |
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dcemaverick
Number of posts : 117 Registration date : 2007-06-09
| Subject: Re: What is FUN ?? Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:11 pm | |
| ah well......the story of my life ain t too distant from this either.....i guess u know y!! | |
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avinc
Number of posts : 354 Age : 36 Location : Delhi Registration date : 2007-07-08
| Subject: Re: What is FUN ?? Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:50 pm | |
| hey aanchal edit the first post with ur new para! | |
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aanchalsaxena
Number of posts : 25 Age : 35 Location : New Delhi Registration date : 2007-07-19
| Subject: Re: What is FUN ?? Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:18 pm | |
| here we go again............... | |
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aanchalsaxena
Number of posts : 25 Age : 35 Location : New Delhi Registration date : 2007-07-19
| Subject: Re: What is FUN ?? Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:20 pm | |
| @ajay(dcemaverick): i do know y..............arent we all here to have fun @ DCE?? | |
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