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Subject: blogofied Tue Aug 07, 2007 5:36 pm

Walking past by my own self

Here I lay all Alone,
His thoughts being my only companion .
Deep into the darkness of the night ,
I pray for his return with all my might .

Morning came With flickering light,
Making my misery too bright.
Neva ask a woman to talk about her pain,
All she'll do is cry in vain.

As the unfriendly hours pass by,
i finally thought to spread my wings and fly.
The fight, I knew wouldn't be smooth,
All i can do is think over it and brood.

Leaving all the unpleasant thoughts aside,
I enter into this selfish world for another ride.
Finally came the dark night,
And I hid myself away from every ones sight .

Number of posts : 16 Registration date : 2007-07-01

hey dis piece of work is fantabulous...........n i lines -
"
Leaving all the unpleasant thoughts aside,
I enter into this selfish world for another ride.
Finally came the dark night,
And I hid myself away from every ones sight "
are simply great !!!!!

Subject: Re: blogofied Tue Aug 07, 2007 8:19 pm

yer poem just hits it...good work becky:D

Subject: Re: blogofied Tue Aug 07, 2007 10:04 pm

kewl....

Subject: Re: blogofied Tue Aug 07, 2007 11:59 pm

thank you people :-)

Subject: Re: blogofied Wed Aug 08, 2007 12:04 am

here is another one ...hope u people like it :)

Final combat .......

So much to do ….

So much to ask for…..

Life aint easy have to fyt ….

Ask me how ask me why all I’l say is lemme try

I don’t wanna hurt u I don’t wanna cry

All I wanna do is make u sigh

All I want is peace ful life

Aah All all mighty

U still male me strife

Life aint easy u gotto to be true

And then all u get is a bolt from the blue…

The lest u expect the less u get ………..

Down in the mud …..u die in distress

Subject: Re: blogofied Wed Aug 08, 2007 1:08 am

why are you so pessimistic about life...imean both your poems give me the same feeling...it's as if you have lost hope...cmon girl..life's short...live it up!!