END OF MY TOLERANCE

Subject: END OF MY TOLERANCE Sun Aug 05, 2007 4:27 pm

The more I push hard,

The more I am pulled back,

By condescending talk,

And condemning attack.

The bitter acceptance of denials and sins,

Blame it on the losses,

Because they overshadow my wins.

Justification of my end,

Lies within my disappointments;

What I feel-what I do,

Is cursed by poisonous assignments.

I’m plagued-I’m enraged,

With abnormality of delays;

I’m going to burn every piece of me,

And destroy myself to ashes.

There aren’t no way of being free,

Because thought and action always clashes;

My only world is all mine,

And I need to be always there,

Because its better to quit than to keep trying,

When tolerance is murdered,

By pathy and untrue care !

Subject: Re: END OF MY TOLERANCE Sun Aug 05, 2007 5:08 pm

s it urs???

Subject: Re: END OF MY TOLERANCE Sun Aug 05, 2007 5:13 pm

You doubt?

Subject: Re: END OF MY TOLERANCE Sun Aug 05, 2007 5:17 pm

well cant say.........f urs den gr8 work...appreciated !!!

Subject: Re: END OF MY TOLERANCE Sun Aug 05, 2007 5:38 pm

Lol...of course thats mine..well no big deal..isn't a really great piece of work!

Number of posts : 16 Registration date : 2007-07-01

hey thoughts are pure ....full of rage and lack of optimism

Subject: Re: END OF MY TOLERANCE Sun Aug 05, 2007 7:39 pm

yup..a gr8 piece f work !!!!

Subject: Re: END OF MY TOLERANCE Sun Aug 05, 2007 8:37 pm

Optimisn doesn't come into place when one is struck with hardships n obstacles in life! All that one is left with is a pen and a paper to put down whatever is going on in his/her mind!

Subject: Re: END OF MY TOLERANCE Sun Aug 05, 2007 8:40 pm

aha !!!!!!

Subject: Re: END OF MY TOLERANCE Sun Aug 05, 2007 8:46 pm

ahaan!!!!!!11

Subject: Re: END OF MY TOLERANCE Sun Aug 05, 2007 8:47 pm

r u ok???miss.. hardship facer???

Subject: Re: END OF MY TOLERANCE Sun Aug 05, 2007 8:50 pm

Yes..dude..why..?

Subject: Re: END OF MY TOLERANCE Sun Aug 05, 2007 8:51 pm

no jst asked anvi !!!!!

Subject: Re: END OF MY TOLERANCE Sun Aug 05, 2007 10:48 pm

well a gr8 way 2express yrslf....it lacked warmth

Number of posts : 16 Registration date : 2007-07-01

i agree that obstacles hinder ur growth n ur attitude towards life .......but u can't jst quit lady ....life just about doin best without caring about results as luck n desinty cannot change .......

Subject: Re: END OF MY TOLERANCE Tue Aug 07, 2007 12:39 pm

Indeed..u are correct..

But the essence of the poem is that it has tried to capture what all is going on in one's mind when he is surrounded by hindrances!

Number of posts : 16 Registration date : 2007-07-01

hmm.....its really gr8 if u cna let out ur emotions through poem .......keep on rhyming and yup next rite - ups wid less hinderences will be apprecitated.
stay happy lol!

Subject: Re: END OF MY TOLERANCE Tue Aug 07, 2007 10:33 pm

Yeah..lol

Subject: Re: END OF MY TOLERANCE Wed Aug 08, 2007 12:04 pm

good writing buddy...loads of frustration sumtimes is liked by ppl......good work:)

Subject: Re: END OF MY TOLERANCE Wed Aug 08, 2007 2:20 pm

Tks for the appreciation! Smile