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Angita

Angita


Female Number of posts : 33
Age : 37
Location : New Delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-12

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PostSubject: ETERNAL REST   ETERNAL REST Icon_minitimeSat Aug 04, 2007 6:26 pm

In a pool of blood my darling lay,
I slowly swept a tear away,
She let out a cry as she twirled in pain
I held her tight and wept again.
As I held her feeble paw,
In her eyes the pain I saw,
The joy of birth had turned into a gloom
As she curled up in the corner of the room
In sweet tenderness, she slowly slept,
her eyes looked at me as I wept.
Then she let out a cry again
I took her in my arms in vain,
She knew she couldn't take it long,
I knew in sometime she would be gone
I felt her sob in my arms this time,
her breath so soft, her feel so fine
Slowly she sank to eternal rest,
As she lay, lifeless on my chest..
As the sadness spread around
I lay my darling on the ground..
As still as the moment on the ground she lay
Death has taken her far away!


A poem to my little dog who died giving birth to pups...
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prateek

prateek


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Registration date : 2007-07-01

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PostSubject: Re: ETERNAL REST   ETERNAL REST Icon_minitimeSat Aug 04, 2007 9:38 pm

HEY ....ur poem is really great ........simple and strong description of emotions in a poetic manner !!
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avinc

avinc


Male Number of posts : 354
Age : 36
Location : Delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-08

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PostSubject: Re: ETERNAL REST   ETERNAL REST Icon_minitimeSat Aug 04, 2007 10:03 pm

wow..my full condolences for the sad reason behind the poem..but yeah u managed to take ur emotions in the best possible way..love it..
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Angita

Angita


Female Number of posts : 33
Age : 37
Location : New Delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-12

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PostSubject: Re: ETERNAL REST   ETERNAL REST Icon_minitimeMon Aug 06, 2007 12:21 pm

hey..thanks guys..just felt like scribbling it out...
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kshitij

kshitij


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Age : 38
Location : indore
Registration date : 2007-08-06

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PostSubject: Re: ETERNAL REST   ETERNAL REST Icon_minitimeMon Aug 06, 2007 1:09 pm

nice poem ........ check mine " IMMMOTAL GOD"
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Angita

Angita


Female Number of posts : 33
Age : 37
Location : New Delhi
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PostSubject: Re: ETERNAL REST   ETERNAL REST Icon_minitimeMon Aug 06, 2007 1:16 pm

thanksh!
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kshitij

kshitij


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PostSubject: Re: ETERNAL REST   ETERNAL REST Icon_minitimeMon Aug 06, 2007 1:18 pm

have a look at my poem "IMMORTAL GOD"
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rishab

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Age : 35
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-26

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PostSubject: Re: ETERNAL REST   ETERNAL REST Icon_minitimeMon Aug 06, 2007 6:13 pm

it sounds like like last kiss????isnt it???no hard feelings buddy...
bt its gud
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Angita

Angita


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PostSubject: Re: ETERNAL REST   ETERNAL REST Icon_minitimeTue Aug 07, 2007 6:22 pm

really, I dont remember the Last kiss poem at all..
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