You were'nt wrong (for you know who)

i was sleepin in sweet melody
it was heaven
i felt near you
love was all around
flowery scent in the air
life was like a song
suddenly
so strange
you said
you gotta go and there won't be turning back
you went
i was left alone
the happiness gone,you broke my heart
you had no other way
i tried to be strong
i tried to hold on
i knew you love me and you weren't wrong

but my heart
doesnt listen
it feels killin without you around
honey i am
not that strong

this heart has a silent prayer
just always be there
these tears aint stoppin
my eyes set to look for you
baby if you want me to wait
i will and it would never be late
never too late for you to return
your voice i hear deep within
coloured in your love
i just can't let go
oh this love so pure

Ain't never gonna stop you
don't wanna be a stone
so live like you want
but when you need someone
i'll always be around
you can't stop me from loving you
cuz i failed myself too
Ain't never gonna stop you
but waitin for your return
honey do come

wud die one day
and the story would end
but in heaven honey would meet again
nor life
nor death
can do my love part
you may live with someone else
build your sky
around another guy
but all this is too small
this much love i do
jus wanna say do return
one day..................
(do return.............)

its a nice poem ... it makes me happy and sad at the same time ... dn ask me y ...

seems honest...

hmm it cant be more than honest thann this

it is touching...really good!! keep up the gud work...

it seems dat yr hurt alot

yes..after reading this do u think that the person i wrote it for should give me a chance?

i think she should definitely give you a chance...you don't find men these days who accept that they were wrong, and the other person wasn't...if not anythin else, she should atleast be friends with you!

thank u for the support......really needed it....hoping the person gets onto this forum and accidentally reads it

a beautiful poem.. realy touchy.. nvr knew so many ppl go through the same thing at d same moment

hey avin...yer poem is nice...but try not to make this thread personal ok? goes against the purpose of the site...keep yer conversations to the chat box or via private messaging....cheers

supriya..i dun really think he made it personal yea..he was just responding to people's queries and comments yea..!!

niks then he shud see wats to be answered n wats not...n if u want to discuss this cum on msg chat

okay boss!!

i think i can answer anything anyone posts here..i hav full right to..i think u shud catch on to other blogs having lengthy conversations going on for nothing..i wrote a poem someone commented on it..and im commenting back...so i dont think u can stop me from doing that..

blogs are made so that people can post things they have written..be it personal/social or anythng..i posted something personal to me..and i think i'll take all the support i can get with it..

yeah thanks a lot.. i know weird point of arguing ya..blogs are like personal thoughts..so its supposed to be personal

any suggestions for the poem?

yea? but i dont know how to play any instrument..but i compose songs..lets see ill give it a shot