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+8Aanchal dcemaverick ritika.suri romina.madan mandeepchadha85 avinc AnIsHa RaLhAn supriya 12 posters |
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supriya
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Age : 36
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-06-05
| Subject: the evolution....and the end???  Fri Aug 03, 2007 3:15 am | |
| Long long ago in the days of yore
There was a jungle with animals running to and fro
The jungle was green and the animals were wild
Some dull, some funny, some always took the devil’s side.
Then lo behold! Came the human being
An animal he was too, but a tad bit supreme
He sniffed around a bit, wandered here and there
Then decided to settle for life with flair
He got his mates and they looked for ways
To make a living in comfort and laze
They discovered fire, they invented the wheel
The great barter system was also a steal
Civilizations developed and they lived on
Mohenjodaro, the Indus, the Chinese and Babylon
The power to think and the power to feel
Is a double-edged sword made up of steel
It created the God and it created the machine
Both of which were eventually used
To cause war with the rest of the beings
It gave love and it gave hate
It taught them trust and then it betrayed
With his emotions and his thoughts
Man thus formed the Community and the Cross
In his ambition to give life ease
He left no stone unturned
He flew without wings, he swam without fins
He created energy and stored it in a tin
Talks with friends became a game of seconds
No more did he have to gesture and beckon
Technology and trade have given us comforts for sure
But it comes at a price,
Says the UN reports
Nature is angry, global warming is the beast
With hailstorm in Delhi and snowstorm in the middle-east
The fumes go up and the heat comes down
And nature hates this not so-merry-go-round
We got eight more years to save our plight
So let us begin by switching off that light
do something please!!!!! | |
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AnIsHa RaLhAn
Number of posts : 158
Age : 35
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-28
| | Subject: Re: the evolution....and the end??? Fri Aug 03, 2007 3:17 am | |
| yea...a gr8 wake up call...wid a rhythm n flow on d go..noice! | |
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avinc
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Age : 36
Location : Delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: the evolution....and the end??? Fri Aug 03, 2007 3:18 am | |
| wow......im left speechless..i think this should be published in all papers across the world..really..amazing..the way u started with scratch ..and summed up 10000years in a few words..
and to top it all..to get the issue of global warming in notice..just amazin | |
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mandeepchadha85
Number of posts : 699
Age : 39
Location : Delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-26
| | Subject: Re: the evolution....and the end??? Fri Aug 03, 2007 3:18 am | |
| now ths is wat i call poetry,,,,,,,,grl u better send this one to UN.....aur next time if a concert like live earth takes place, u better send ths to them....simply amazing... | |
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supriya
Number of posts : 439
Age : 36
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-06-05
| | Subject: Re: the evolution....and the end??? Fri Aug 03, 2007 3:19 am | |
| u guys got no idea wat zis means to me....thaaaanks a ton!!! | |
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romina.madan
Number of posts : 236
Age : 36
Registration date : 2007-07-03
| | Subject: Re: the evolution....and the end??? Fri Aug 03, 2007 11:46 am | |
| hw does ur brainwork man...simly amazing....ur god | |
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ritika.suri
Number of posts : 237
Age : 36
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-02
| | Subject: Re: the evolution....and the end??? Fri Aug 03, 2007 2:11 pm | |
| wow i love this poem ... seriously inspiring n makes u wanna tak action ! u shud definately send it to newspapers gurl ! | |
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dcemaverick
Number of posts : 117
Registration date : 2007-06-09
| | Subject: Re: the evolution....and the end??? Fri Aug 03, 2007 2:40 pm | |
| zat could be ze next prologu to "a brief history of civilization" | |
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Aanchal
Number of posts : 37
Registration date : 2007-06-04
| | Subject: Re: the evolution....and the end??? Fri Aug 03, 2007 4:39 pm | |
| Absolutely amazing supriya!!!! Great work!!! | |
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Nikhita
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Age : 36
Location : Delhi
Registration date : 2007-06-09
| | Subject: Re: the evolution....and the end??? Fri Aug 03, 2007 5:31 pm | |
| way to go Sup...brilliant!! | |
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supriya
Number of posts : 439
Age : 36
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-06-05
| | Subject: Re: the evolution....and the end??? Fri Aug 03, 2007 8:51 pm | |
| thank u ppl..  ..but i seriously think we shud do sumfink about it | |
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arkantos2good
Number of posts : 16
Age : 36
Location : india
Registration date : 2007-08-03
| | Subject: Re: the evolution....and the end??? Fri Aug 03, 2007 11:28 pm | |
| good one sue... i like the fact that you use exact events and actions of us homosapiens to summarise jow we are the worst product of evolution... Humble beginnings (discovering fire) evolves into a mass killing tool... greatly done... you rock dudette!!! | |
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supriya
Number of posts : 439
Age : 36
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-06-05
| | Subject: Re: the evolution....and the end??? Fri Aug 03, 2007 11:30 pm | |
| bless u | |
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anwesha_ghosh
Number of posts : 137
Age : 36
Location : Kolkata
Registration date : 2007-07-11
| | Subject: Re: the evolution....and the end??? Fri Aug 03, 2007 11:33 pm | |
| Simple n sweet yet touches u at d rite place!!! Way ta go! | |
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Reverie
Number of posts : 39
Age : 36
Registration date : 2007-07-09
| | Subject: Re: the evolution....and the end??? Fri Aug 03, 2007 11:59 pm | |
| THIS, is what I call brilliant shit. precisely.
and then,
i go touchy ;P | |
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supriya
Number of posts : 439
Age : 36
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-06-05
| | Subject: Re: the evolution....and the end??? Tue Aug 07, 2007 12:11 am | |
| thank u shreya n anweshaaaa | |
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