the smoke obscures my view

"THE SMOKE OBSCURES MY VIEW"

IT IS DARK, WAY BEYOND SUNSET AND MY EYES PERCIEVE NOTHING. MAYBE THERE'S A HAND NEARBY, MAYBE THERE'S A HEART BEATING TO SAVE ME FROM AN UNTIMELY EXIT TO THE ENDLESS WORLD. BUT NO, MY SENSES HAVE FORGOTTEN ALL THAT WAS TAUGHT TO THEM IN THE EIGHTEEN YEARS OF MY EXISTENCE. EXISTENCE THAT WAS EVENTFUL AT ONE TIME BUT IS FUTILE NOW. AND NOW I KNOW MAYBE IT'S THE CRACK OF DAWN, BUT THE SMOKE OBSCURES MY VIEW

"HOPE AFLOATS IN STILL WATERS,


IN RAVISHING RIVERS IT'S GONE"



YES MY LIFE IS STILL, BUT THERE'S NO HOPE LEFT.THIS LOST LIFE WON'T EVER COME BACK AND NEVER WILL I HAVE THE TIME TO SAY THAT I WAS WRONG THERE AND WAS AT THE BAY. I FEEL SO HELPLESS, SO ABANDONED IN THIS WORLD THAT HAS SOMETHING IN STORE FOR ALL ITS INHABITANTS.



"I AM READY TO MEET MY MAKER,WHETHER MY MAKER IS PREPARED FOR THE ORDEAL OF MEETING ME IS ANOTHER MATTER"

--WINSTON CHURCHILL



THIS HOLDS TRUE FOR ME TOO.MY MAKER WOULD BE TAKEN ABACK TO SEE HIS CREATION IN THE CONDITION THAT I AM IN TODAY. ALL THAT WAS GRANTED TO ME IS LOST MIDWAY.



THE 'ME' WHICH ONCE COMMANDED RESPECT NOW INVITES A MERE PITY AND PRAYERS FOR A PEACEFUL EXIT.EVERYTHING SEEMS SO DIFFERENT NOW. EVEN MY MOTHER'S FOOTSTEPS SOUND LIKE 'THE ALARUM OF THE SENTINEL'. EVERY FOOTSTEP, EVERY WHISPER, EVEN EVERY HEARTBEAT FEELS LIKE THE DEATH KNELL.



I DO NOT FEAR DEATH, ALL THAT I WANT IS TO ENJOY MY LAST DAYS IN THIS BEAUTIFUL WORLD, BASKING IN THE WINTER SUN, RELIVING CHILDHOOD WITH MY FRIENDS. I WANT TO LOOK OVER THE MAJESTIC SEAS, HOLDING THE HANDS OF MY BELOVED, BUT … 'THE

SMOKE OBSCURES MY VIEW….'

no replies........... thats bad.. or was it that bad????

Poignant... dude, what inspires this?

i dint get u dude....wat wre u tryn' 2say???

i agree withr rishab...couldn't really get wat u wanted to get across?? please elaborate!

explanations ha...... well from wat i see... this is the view of life by a person who's about to die........... of course a known death and his every thought is governed by the fact that he is about to die............ maybe im clear nw