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AnIsHa RaLhAn
 Number of posts : 158
Age : 35
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-28
| Subject: horse named wishez...do comment!  Sat Jul 28, 2007 2:30 pm | |
| she came alone in this marketplace
knowing not a single face..
yet smiled at hundreds
wishing her nutrients to b fed..
pamper and love were her demands
wished everyone in the family to become her fans..
as she heard the fables and tales
behaving a princess infront of her pals..
seeking beautiful dresses
wishing mum to call her gorgeous..
then the competition at school
to be the most popular and cool..
some more marks and lots of adulation
from god she wanted all kinds of congratulations..
from earning big bucks
to have a gracious luck..
wanting the best mate
wishin a wonderful fate..
glory, husband a loving family
to live in her abode happily..
with carrer reaching its peak
the wishes never seems to go bleak..
no disease please,begged she
to have a name n fame, worth see..
even at 40 she went on her knees
wishing all difficulties to cease..
lived her life all these years
had no more aspirations or fears..
but the wishes never had an end
prayed to have her eyes closed peacefully on the bed..
this horse named wishes is never tired
with lots to expect and beget..
all her life it ran and ran fast
only to catch up a breath at last..
Peace
Hwz it:?:
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mandeepchadha85
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Age : 39
Location : Delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-26
| | Subject: Re: horse named wishez...do comment! Sat Jul 28, 2007 3:15 pm | |
| hey really nice....liked it...  | |
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Nikhita
Number of posts : 1492
Age : 36
Location : Delhi
Registration date : 2007-06-09
| | Subject: Re: horse named wishez...do comment! Sat Jul 28, 2007 9:22 pm | |
| i really liekd it...one of the very genuine poems in this section...great going gal! | |
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AnIsHa RaLhAn
Number of posts : 158
Age : 35
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-28
| | Subject: Re: horse named wishez...do comment! Sat Jul 28, 2007 10:54 pm | |
| thnakye pplz...luv ya commentz keep readin!! | |
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AnIsHa RaLhAn
Number of posts : 158
Age : 35
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-28
| | Subject: Re: horse named wishez...do comment! Tue Jul 31, 2007 10:05 pm | |
| hey u can mention ye horses as well | |
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Nikhita
Number of posts : 1492
Age : 36
Location : Delhi
Registration date : 2007-06-09
| | Subject: Re: horse named wishez...do comment! Wed Aug 01, 2007 1:39 am | |
| my horses....well if you start counting them, am sure the number will go into millions...i have a new wish every minute...sometimes it is as small as having icecream and sometimes as big as ruling this world...sometimes it is as sweet as beign the best daughter in this world...and sometimes it is as rude as killing that bitch in colllege....iso wish i knew wat wishes of mine were gonna come true...hehe | |
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AnIsHa RaLhAn
Number of posts : 158
Age : 35
Location : delhi
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| | Subject: Re: horse named wishez...do comment! Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:02 am | |
| happenz 2 evry1 u nt ew  | |
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ritika.suri
Number of posts : 237
Age : 36
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-02
| | Subject: Re: horse named wishez...do comment! Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:09 am | |
| really liked dis poem .... i think almost all of us have these horses dat u mentioned! | |
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AnIsHa RaLhAn
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| | Subject: Re: horse named wishez...do comment! Thu Aug 02, 2007 11:51 pm | |
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AnIsHa RaLhAn
Number of posts : 158
Age : 35
Location : delhi
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| | Subject: Re: horse named wishez...do comment! Fri Aug 10, 2007 11:38 pm | |
| sumtyms ders nt enuf space in d stable 2 fit mah horses [ ] | |
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gurpreet_bagga
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Age : 35
Location : Pune
Registration date : 2007-08-12
| | Subject: Re: horse named wishez...do comment! Tue Aug 14, 2007 11:46 pm | |
| gud one... appreciate ur work... | |
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AnIsHa RaLhAn
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| | Subject: Re: horse named wishez...do comment! Wed Aug 15, 2007 12:08 pm | |
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KartikDhar
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| | Subject: Re: horse named wishez...do comment! Wed Aug 15, 2007 12:28 pm | |
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lostnfoundgunjan
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Age : 33
Location : New Delhi
Registration date : 2007-08-11
| | Subject: Re: horse named wishez...do comment! Wed Aug 15, 2007 1:53 pm | |
| dat ws real kool... rock on.. | |
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rishab
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Age : 35
Location : delhi
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| | Subject: Re: horse named wishez...do comment! Wed Aug 15, 2007 11:55 pm | |
| gr8 work anisha...keep it goin | |
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dcemaverick
Number of posts : 117
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| | Subject: Re: horse named wishez...do comment! Thu Aug 16, 2007 7:43 pm | |
| simple solution to this endless "wishes" problem is found in economics
"Wishes can be termed desires only if you are willing to work for them"
Desire don t just wish.
Walt Disney once said "If u can dream it,you can do it!"
So .....Just Do it! | |
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AnIsHa RaLhAn
Number of posts : 158
Age : 35
Location : delhi
Registration date : 2007-07-28
| | Subject: Re: horse named wishez...do comment! Thu Aug 16, 2007 9:36 pm | |
| thnk ye al..its heartenin 2 c such a response!! | |
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