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simrandewan

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PostSubject: please open the door   Sat Jul 14, 2007 8:58 pm

im standin outside... cant sumone hear?
have i reached far? or no one wants to be near?
no ones answering... y duznt anyone open the door?
m shouting since forever, my throats gone sore....
pls open open the door.. m standing outside alone......

where m i exactly, i havent a clue!
there is beauty all around me, the breathtaking sky's blue
there r soothing sounds cumin from inside,
chirpy noises, all the depressions set aside...
i wanna cum inside, pls open the door... m standing outside alone...

ppl r not divided into classes or castes...
money has no value... that keeps me aghast!
there,love iz the only "god" that isnt hollow
here, "frendship" is the only religion to follow!
i wanna cum inside, pls open the door... m standing outside alone!

there, in the sacred name of "god" ppl dont kill...
there is no poverty, all stomachs r filled!
girls don get harassed.... there.....
addictions r banned, fair n square...
i wanna cum inside, pls open the door.... m standing outside alone!

it luks like paradise.. where i wanna be...
like all the beings, free..
in a flush of excitement, i knocked relly hard,
i said "i wanna cum inside, pls open the door.... m standing outside alone!
i heard a voice from inside, "go home child, go to places more......
v have no place relly, UR KNOCKING ON HEAVENS DOOR"
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simrandewan

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PostSubject: Re: please open the door   Fri Jul 27, 2007 3:57 am

hellol????????
did none actually read my poem? coz i dint get like any replies... over two weeks!!!
is it lik reely that bad???????????
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mandeepchadha85

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PostSubject: Re: please open the door   Mon Jul 30, 2007 7:48 pm

huhahahahahhahaha......and sumone replied...



This is wat i ve been waiting for, another prey on my door,
its not reality,stupid girl dint realize,
you are thinking, exactly wat i want you to fantasize,

things look bful,calm and perfect,
this aint no heaven,
even a drop of water would be hard to get,

from outside ppl look friendly, gentle and caring,
but to survive here, u have to be bold and daring,

u thnk money has no value here,u find it hard to believe?..
haha..just dat things arent transparent,
everyones got, a lot up their sleeves...

yes, there r no classes, their r no castes,
it's the hatred and jealousy, which has kept them apart,
girls arent safe here, they don have no rights,
poor have been thrown into oblivion, ignored and deprived

time to reveal the truth, hope u arent scared,
don worry my child, you'll be pampered and cared,
i aint no messenger of god, this aint a dream anymore,
I AM THE DEVIL and this is my hell,
Come inside my child, I ve opened the door
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simrandewan

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PostSubject: Re: please open the door   Mon Jul 30, 2007 7:57 pm

dude...u scared me... darwan of hell..... not bad haan....
u overpowerd my poem man... but nevermind.. its bettr thn mine!!!!!!
way to go sardara!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: please open the door   Mon Jul 30, 2007 8:17 pm

hahaha..thanx babe...m sorry i spoiled ur dream....
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nayanika

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PostSubject: Re: please open the door   Mon Jul 30, 2007 10:58 pm

Lovely poem.simmi....cud come only from u..so innovative...really nice...Smile
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aditisharma

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PostSubject: Re: please open the door   Mon Jul 30, 2007 11:52 pm

hey nice poem..Smile....also.....i couldnt help noticing that cute lil thing ur holding in ur pic....adoreable!
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PostSubject: Re: please open the door   Tue Jul 31, 2007 2:38 am

thnx aditi.... her name's bingo... pretty notty n adorable!!!
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PostSubject: Re: please open the door   Sun Sep 02, 2007 3:17 am

do u ppl reely think heaven exists? or hell is the place to be?
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