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ankita poddar
 Number of posts : 113
Age : 35
Location : pune
Registration date : 2007-07-10
| Subject: tainted love  Tue Jul 10, 2007 7:18 pm | |
| tell me why i had to cry
everytime i tried to fly
why did i have to fall
suspended like a rag doll
twisted n wicked is the mind of those
who tried to make me drown
why is it that u couldn't see
why did u not try to save me
you didn't try to take away the pain
speared thru my heart you let my blood drain
lost n lonely i tried to run
but now the damage has been done
i have nowhere to go
lying in my grave i no longer know
whether i'll see u again
but my hopes are all in vain
& now holding my last breath
i silently await the call of death..
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Pragya
Number of posts : 795
Registration date : 2007-06-22
| | Subject: Re: tainted love Tue Jul 10, 2007 7:23 pm | |
| nice poem ankita...however i would like to change the last line...why would you await the call of death???make it other way round.... | |
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Nikhita
Number of posts : 1492
Age : 36
Location : Delhi
Registration date : 2007-06-09
| | Subject: Re: tainted love Tue Jul 10, 2007 7:24 pm | |
| nice poem...but it reflects a very negative approach to life...mind telling me what exactly it is about? | |
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gopalnair11
 Number of posts : 24
Age : 35
Location : Pune
Registration date : 2007-07-11
| | Subject: Re: tainted love Wed Jul 11, 2007 2:59 pm | |
| i guess...what poddy wants to say(dats what we call ankita in collg....sry for dat...hehe)....is that luv is nt a bed of roses....!!!!!!!!! am i remotely close to wat u wanna say???????   | |
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ankita poddar
Number of posts : 113
Age : 35
Location : pune
Registration date : 2007-07-10
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virender.vyas
Number of posts : 36
Age : 41
Registration date : 2007-07-06
| | Subject: Re: tainted love Thu Jul 12, 2007 11:22 pm | |
| melancholy ... can be a gud metal song!!  | |
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abhimanyu.sarkar
Number of posts : 26
Age : 35
Location : Pune
Registration date : 2007-07-14
| | Subject: Re: tainted love Sat Jul 14, 2007 5:49 pm | |
| nice poem..i guess everybody has had their share of heartbreaks in love but its still better to have loved and lost than not to love at all .....  | |
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ankita poddar
Number of posts : 113
Age : 35
Location : pune
Registration date : 2007-07-10
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adi
Number of posts : 143
Age : 37
Location : kolkata
Registration date : 2007-07-07
| | Subject: Re: tainted love Tue Jul 17, 2007 12:21 pm | |
| thats a very good poem...nice n dark...agree with virender can be a good song..a slow movin heavy number.... | |
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naznad13
Number of posts : 82
Age : 34
Location : PUNE,INDIA
Registration date : 2007-07-16
| | Subject: Re: tainted love Tue Jul 17, 2007 7:54 pm | |
| great going ankita:) !!!!keep it up...loved ur poem.....mind putting it in da mag too??? | |
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anandita
Number of posts : 27
Age : 36
Location : pune
Registration date : 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: tainted love Wed Jul 18, 2007 2:31 pm | |
| hey ankita... cool poem..... good goin....  | |
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...basically rite a lot of dark stuff.vl put up more..
