SUPERZEROES!!!

Subject: SUPERZEROES!!! Sat Jul 07, 2007 9:23 pm

Down wid pain, widout hesitation,

he tied me up cruelly, wht was his intention?

my burning eyes, searching for what?

a loving helping hand, which i never got..

my broken bangles, my broken chain,

crying for help, bruised in pain...

where r the ppl needed at a time like this?

no god, no angel, but all were missd...

torture it was, wether mental or physical...

physical part has healed,

am left wid a scar thats mental

why cudnt he be kind? or a bit gentle?

was it his revenge? or did it co-incide?

the whole world stepped out, n i was inside!

was i a victim of criminal assault?

yes, i was.. but was it my fault?

i fell prey, to a psychotic brain...

all my senses about to drain...

was it pre planned? or was he a plain lunatic?

for me he was bloody disgusting n sick!

y do i feel, the world has stepped out?

some make me uneasy, some make me proud!

my loved ones are forever on my side,

by my innocence, they all abide..

but in that span of time, whom did i need?

y was i punished? for sumone elses greed?

with regret i recall, the promises people made..

never thought those promises wud easily fade!

they made me secure, when there was no point

he wasnt alone in this m sure,

it was all planned!

they showed me their "power", they showed me their "source"!

all those promises? was it all forced?

whether i wud survive, or wud i be blind?

nothing apart from my "HEROES" was on my mind...

i felt like a survivor, swimming till the coast....

where were my "SUPERHEROES" when i needed them the most?

Number of posts : 125 Registration date : 2007-06-07

Simran,this is fantasteek. loved ur last line
would u mind sharing ur story, with me? as comes across ur write ups.u have to be feeling each word to write that! bravo.inspirational

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Wed Jul 11, 2007 12:00 am

hi samridhi, thnx for shwin interest in my poem n my life... u wana know ma story?
juz c my other writeup... "revenge off the mind"... its the story behind this poem... thnx for ur comment....

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Wed Jul 11, 2007 12:02 am

are smriti and simran the same ppl?

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Wed Jul 11, 2007 11:30 pm

no actually simrans mah sis!!...n we share d same comp...she didn realize dat i ws alrdy logged in!!!! Laughing

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Thu Jul 12, 2007 12:16 am

but whose poem is it?

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Thu Jul 12, 2007 2:34 am

Hey sorry for intrudin but you got some real tallent... really nice poem............ So someone hurt u real bad ha? well its not my business.... but i dont mind trying out the job of being a superhero....... i think im pity good at it.... besides ive gone through alot myself...... so wht u doin now?

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Thu Jul 12, 2007 9:22 am

ds poem is mind blowing...guys u got soo much talent i must say...

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Thu Jul 12, 2007 12:37 pm

it is in these circumstances that you realise the biggest truth of your life....
the hero lies within you....
no matter what others do, in the end of the day you are the one who will rise from the ashes once you wake up the hero (or god, any name will do), inside your mnd, your heart and you soul.
and i truly believe that it is this realisation that sets some people apart from the rest. expecting help from others, and meeting with dissappointment leads to a painful heartbreak.
but then there are those who succumb to this trauma, and then there are those who refuse to give up and hence end up discovering the hidden strength inside them......

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Fri Jul 13, 2007 1:04 am

hey riju, thnx for such an awsum comment.. ill keep it in ma mind for sure!!!!

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Fri Jul 13, 2007 1:05 am

thnx nandini... well, i don kno abt talent... this was strait from the heart...

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Fri Jul 13, 2007 1:08 am

mr gonsalves, thnx for the luvly thot... so u wanna becum a superhero? y dont u try out "planet earth"? i hear they have a vacency!!!!!
lol.....

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Fri Jul 13, 2007 1:10 am

hey nikhita, its actly my poem... simran... thnx for the comment

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Sat Jul 14, 2007 8:37 pm

haha ya heard about the vacancy.... but the job is much to hard for me right now...... need few more yrs to get there and plz call me John/....... Mr Gonsalves sounds so old Smile

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Tue Jul 31, 2007 3:21 am

hmmmm...ignorance is the biggest sin....wake up ppl....neways....bful choice of words...bful theme....i loved it good goin simran...

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Tue Jul 31, 2007 3:08 pm

hey simran ur brilliant yar...vry nice poem....too gud...n i agree vd riju...heroes lies within u.....

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Thu Aug 09, 2007 1:02 am

da thng i love bout u is dat u jus speak frm ur heart n' evry word of dis poem piercez my brain.......pullz me dwn wid dis rage.........makez me insane!!!!! dhazzz 1 grr8 thng dat riju commented!!!!

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Thu Aug 09, 2007 1:09 am

wow man..this is clearly one of the best poems ive read here till now! i jus feel really sorry..for your pain..
life's a bitch anyway

Subject: Re: SUPERZEROES!!! Thu Aug 09, 2007 1:15 am

mind blowing ... amaing poem ... potrays all d pain n hurt of the poet ....